Draft Two

Draft Two- Audience Feedback

         

‘I really like the arcade shot, it makes the video look really retro and vintage.’

‘I like the fact you have utilised the drums within the music video, and also promoted the bands logo.’

‘The timing of the drums works really well now and have developed from the first draft

‘I really like the peach within the middle section and it seems to be a significant part of the video, you could repeat this image to reinforce the meaning throughout.’

'I like the quick succession of the beginning shots, however to keep the audience engaged maybe you could increase the number of different shots and contrasting angles to limit repetition'

'Where the shots parallel the lyrics, works really well to symbolise the lyrics in a creative way with the use of props. Possibly, to complete missing sections within  your music video, adding different shots to also match the lyrics could be beneficial, this technique I think would be really effective to generate more humorous aspects within your video'

• We decided to capture more varied angles of the performance, to ensure that our video is different and contains a variety of shots to ensure our audience is focused. We also removed most of the repetition of similar performance shots and filmed in different areas. We experimented with contrasting ideas by filming various objects being smashed, which could be linked with certain lyrics.